Re: *** Draft 8 Final - Press Release ***

Harvey J. Stein (hjstein@bfr.co.il)
24 Jan 1999 11:05:52 +0200


May I suggest that the Press Release would be punchier if it placed
the Microsoft quote earlier, as in:

Today Linus Torvalds, the main developer and coordinator of the
Linux kernel team, released a major new version of the Linux
kernel. This update includes an advanced collection of low-level
features.

"Linux represents a best-of-breed UNIX, that is trusted on mission
critical applications, and - due to its open source code - has a
long term credibility which exceeds many other competitive
operating systems." -- Microsoft employees Josh Cohen and Vinod
Valloppillil, in a competitive examination of Linux (The so-called
"Halloween Document", <http://www.opensource.org/halloween.html>)

Highlights include:

* ...

-- 
Harvey J. Stein
BFM Financial Research
hjstein@bfr.co.il

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