Re: [PATCH v4] Remove duplicated words across the whole documentation

From: Jules Maselbas
Date: Mon Aug 29 2022 - 05:26:50 EST


Hi Randy,

On Fri, Aug 26, 2022 at 04:06:14PM -0700, Randy Dunlap wrote:
> Hi Jules,
>
> On 8/26/22 09:56, Jules Maselbas wrote:
> > diff --git a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> > index f1f4e6a85a29..6a0c2cc722eb 100644
> > --- a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> > +++ b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> > @@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ The switchdev driver can know a particular port's position in the topology by
> > monitoring NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER notifications. For example, a port moved into a
> > bond will see it's upper master change. If that bond is moved into a bridge,
> > the bond's upper master will change. And so on. The driver will track such
> > -movements to know what position a port is in in the overall topology by
> > +movements to know what position a port is in the overall topology by
>
> I don't think any change is needed here.
> The rest look good to me.
You're right.

>
> > registering for netdevice events and acting on NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER.
>
>
> > There are likely more duplicated words.
>
> /methinks that you have barely scratched the surface. :)
yeah... "am doing my part" ;)

Thanks for your time, will send a v5 shortly