Re: [PATCH v2 2/5] ARM: mstar: Add machine for MStar/Sigmastar infinity/mercury family ARMv7 SoCs

[Daniel Palmer]

Hi Andreas,

On Thu, 11 Jun 2020 at 23:27, Andreas FÃrber <afaerber@xxxxxxx> wrote:
>
> Hi Daniel,
>
> Am 11.06.20 um 15:01 schrieb Daniel Palmer:
> > On Thu, 11 Jun 2020 at 21:49, Andreas FÃrber <afaerber@xxxxxxx> wrote:
> >>> peripherals and system memory in a single tiny QFN package that
> >>> can be hand soldered allowing almost anyone to embed Linux
> >>
> >> "soldered, allowing"?
> >
> > The original reads ok to me. Maybe I can just split that into two sentences?
> > Like ".. QFN package that can be hand soldered. This allows almost anyone..".
>
> As non-native speaker I merely wondered whether a comma should better be
> inserted to separate the two parts of the sentence. Splitting it in two
> or leaving as is should be fine, too - I assume you're a native speaker.

I'm a native speaker but it's not my daily driver anymore so I often mangle it.

> Most people will rather read the bindings document than old git history,
> so you might want to consider adding such a description below its title.

I'll move the blurb and maybe reword it.

> Which reminds me, in 1/5 you should probably add a W: line (after S:
> according to above sort commit) pointing to your
> http://linux-chenxing.org/ website.
>
> And for the community following your project, you may want to set up a
> linux-chenxing mailing list on vger.kernel.org or on infradead.org and
> add it as L:, to allow for error reports and patches to not just go to
> you and crowded LAKML.

Very good points. I was thinking I should probably get this into mainline
before setting up lists etc.

Thanks,

Daniel