Re: Revised add_key(2) man page for review

[Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)]

Hello David

Thanks for the review!

On 12/13/2016 11:58 AM, David Howells wrote:
> Michael Kerrisk (man-pages) <mtk.manpages@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
>>        The destination keyring serial number may be that  of  a  valid
>>        keyring for which the caller has write permission, or it may be
>>        one of the following special keyring IDs:
> 
> No comma before "or".

Actually, I think its okay with the comma. But I decided anyway to 
reword this into two sentences.

>>        "user" This is a general purpose key type whose payload may  be
>> ...
>>       "keyring"
> 
> It probably makes sense to put keyring either first or last.

Done.

> 
>>        "keyring"
>>               Keyrings are special key types that may contain links to
>>               sequences  of other keys of any type.  If this interface
>>               is used to create a keyring, then a NULL payload  should
>>               be specified, and plen should be zero.
> 
> I think "then payload should be NULL and plen should be zero." sounds better.

Agreed. Fixed.

>>        "logon" (since Linux 3.3)
>>               This  key type is essentially the same as "user", but it
>>               does not provide reading.
> 
> "permit the key to be read" rather than "provide reading", I think.

Fixed.

>>        "big_key" (since Linux 3.13)
>>               This  key type is similar to "user", but may hold a payâ
>>               load of up to 1 MiB.  If the key payload is large,  then
>>               it  may  be stored in swap space rather than kernel memâ
>>               ory.
> 
> "stored encrypted in swap space".

Fixed.

>>            printf("Key ID is %lx\n", (long) key);
> 
> key_serial_t is an int.  It doesn't really need casting to long.

Well, this is a common way of dealing with opaque integer system data
types, so that one does not encode a representational dependency into
printf(). (Relies on the assumption that the underlying type is no
bigger than long. The alternative these days is a cast to (intmax_t) 
plus %jd.) [So, for the moment, I'll leave the text as is.]

Cheers,

Micael

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